Warm-up:
Opinion and Evidence
#6: Jealousy in a romantic relationship is usually a sign of problems being formed. Maybe the girl that the boy is with has a secret admirer or it could be the other way around. Who knows? It may even be your best friends or even family! Most problems in relationships involve jealousy and hate the outcome is often the relationship being placed apart. The cause is usually rumors that form into fights and dislike of one another.
#5:
Men are attracted to women who are assertive and bod because maybe that’s what
they both have in common. Both girl and boy may be into sports and all the hard
core stuff. Strong and bold is what most men like and are attracted to. Looks
and everything else don’t really matter. What matters, is what’s inside the
heart.
-This
entry exemplifies my best work because it shows an explanation of advice. Maybe
some people need advice on what’s up with relationships. Rumors are number one
in difficulties in relationships. How do I know? Experience. Another reason why this exemplifies my work is because;
I’ve tried my best to get this done in about five minutes. Although Ms. Kline’
strict code of conduct is very bold and serious, we are able to pull through.
After 1 whole semester, were sort of getting the hang of it. This journal entry
shows a reflection of reading from the book, “Much Ado about Nothing”. It also shows that I explained my thoughts
through advice and the truth.
I've managed my impulsivity to take some thoughts and put
it on paper. But, not too much time. Also some time to see what I've written to
make sense. Errors fixed, and sentences fixed. I stopped to make adjustments
and to clearly explain myself, just in case I share it to the class.
The
Glo I’ve used to get this done is being a self-directed learner. After Ms.
Kline’s instructions we are to go straight to work. I have directed myself
without further instructions. If any questions I would try and figure it out
myself than go back to work. I’ve just went through by directing myself without
any support unless instructed by Ms. Kline.


Pam,
ReplyDeleteYou make some good points in this entry, but the writing is a bit choppy. See if you can write sentences of different lengths in your next posts.
Also, where is your image? Please be sure to read the instructions and rubric carefully before posting.